character creation Zacharyp10

[list]|BASICS|
Name:Zachary Merrick Pendarvis
Age:14
(Birthplace:Dark Temple
Current Residence:Dark Temple
Rank:Bender
Element:Fire and Dark
Pets:A black horse
Weapons: 18 IN Long Sword
[size=11]Birthday:11/16/603 AO
Blood type: O
Hobbies: Cooking
Quirks: Likes old songs
Character Theme: Never Gunna give you up
[size=18]|APPEARANCE|5,7 average weight and small sized scar on back of head from falling off horse
[size=11]Hair: Blond Buzzed cut 2 IN ripped off on back of head showing the scar on back of head
(Eyes: Blue changes to grey from time to time about 3/4 of and In up and down and 3/4 wide
\Height: 5 foot 6 IN
Clothes: WearsRobes with the symbol of Darkness on them or fire
and when not at fire temples or dark temples a easy to move in black out fit with red stripes
Skin:Very Smooth Skin pale
Body Type:Avearage amount of muscle
Image: http://tektek.org/avatar/49023557][img]https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img221/9853/tek4f92ae238382a3434104z.png
[size=18]|CHARACTERISTISTICS: Enjoys Cooking and tea.
[size=11]Personality: Mostly neutral sometimes evil. Has short temper.
Personal Strengths: Sozins Comet Sunrise Sunset for Darkness Tea Rage
Personal Weaknesses: Water Benders Solar Eclispes hard choices
Personal Hero: Zuko from many years ago.
Dreams and Ambitions:Yes to become fire lord and to become rich.
(Likes: Cooking, tea, fire, Sozins Comet, Darkness

Dislikes:Solar Eclispes, Water Benders, Waves, Full moons
Brief History: Gotten a rival at 9. Fell off horse at 7.

Your sword would actually be a shortsword since 18 inches is about a foot and a half. If you want a longsword you can just put longsword most people are able to picture the size of it.

Add more details to the clothes, personality, and history.

I have also just noticed he bends two elements. You will have to make the background at leas two paragraphs and then add something that was very traumatic for him to be able to bend those two elements.