Character creation waiting for approval

Subject: Character creation waiting for approval Wed Jul 11, 2012 6:17 pm

|BASICS|

Name: Kolack Nuzai

Age: 29

Birthplace: Town of Dara, Earth Kingdom

Current Residence:Ba sing se, Earth Kingdom

Rank: Bender

Occupation: Assassin, father, husband.

Element: Earth, Metal, bone.

Pets: None

Weapons: Boots, Glove R hand, Bending, Body and left arm

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Birthday:June 2nd, 693 A.O.

Blood type: O+

Hobbies: Training, Sculpting, fathering

Quirks: He May seem tough but hes a really nice guy if you get to
know him. He has a mechanical arm.

Family: Two brothers, Kozo (age 23,Non Bender) and Kameron (age 31, Bender) Mother: Runi (Non Bender), and Father: Kayro (Bender).

Character Theme: Monster by Skillet

|APPEARANCE|

Hair: He has hair long enough to reach his nose, Its
messy, unkept, multicolored (light brown, Black, dark brown) and turns l
ighter in the summer

Eyes: Medium sized, hazely colored eyes that turn brownish gold in
the summer

Height: 6'3

Clothes: He wears an old jacket that belonged to his father made
from old brown leather and fine wool, he wears some regular trousers nice
for moving around quick and stealthy, and has some worn boots with some
two small metal studs on the front and back. He is wearing a small pendant
tied to string around his neck with the earth nations symbol on it.

Skin: Slightly rough, tanned skin, with a little bit of hair. Left arm is mechanical.

Body Type: Tall, Slim, Slightly Muscular.

Image:

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|CHARACTERISTICS|

Personality: He has two personalities, adventurer and
assassin. His adventurer side is opptimistic, energenic, hard working, and
doesnt dismiss a task untill its done. His assassin side is skilled, stealthy,
focused and deadly. he can be quite the killer in this state.

Personal Strengths: He is a weapons expert and a master earthbender. He also has a mechanical left arm that he can use for hand to hand.

Personal Weaknesses: He has 1 physical weaknesse if his left arm is a screw short it will completely shut down, but his mental weakness is
emotional, thats his worst spot to be hit... the heart.

Hamartia:He has a very emotional weak spot. but I will never reveal
that.

Personal Hero:None

Dreams and Ambitions: Protecting his daughter and making her the greatest earthbender ever.

Likes: Food, Art, Culture, Techniques, Weapons, Family, and The pendant that his father gave him for his birthday.

Dislikes: Water, Mercinaries, thugs, muggers, evil doers

Brief History:When a young infant, his oldest brother Kameron was jealous... he got all the attention until the baby came. From that point on it was a sibling rivalry like no other, and Kolack never even noticed it. At age 5 Kolack and Kameron had another surprise coming, a third child. but even though the baby was coming soon, there were mor important matters for their parents to attend to. Kolack discovered his ability to bend at age 6 and from then on he and his father (Kayro) trained a month after his bending abuilities were discovered. At ten years old Kolack had learned much technique and focus, but not even close to pass his brother Kameron.
In his teen years, on his 15 birthday, Kolack got something very special. His father enrolled him in a school for war and fighting tactics at The city of Omashu and his father gave him a silver pendant of the earth symbol.
This gave him an advantage to tactics and fighting techniques.
August 7, 707 O.A. The tragic murder of his father, Kyro Nuzai, Age 47. After avenging his fathers death he has gained family honor but lost his arm. After 10 years, his friend's daughter has made a fine mechanic out of herself and a fine arm for Kolack. Today he is a father of his daughter Kiki Nuzai and a husband of Heaven Naomi, living in the inner ring of Ba sing se. He is a homeschool teacher and an awesome uncle figure taking his kid and "Nephew and Neise" on crazy trips and camping adventures.

Subject: Re: Character creation waiting for approval Wed Jul 11, 2012 9:07 pm

Needs longer history.

Subject: Re: Character creation waiting for approval Wed Jul 11, 2012 9:11 pm

Earthy already told him dude lol.

Subject: Re: Character creation waiting for approval Thu Jul 12, 2012 12:04 am

okay ive done it ive edited it

Subject: Re: Character creation waiting for approval Thu Jul 12, 2012 1:00 am

NOOW approved. Lol was it that hard?

Subject: Re: Character creation waiting for approval Thu Jul 12, 2012 10:07 am

Disapproved by me. That's not really a history, it's just explaining 1 year of a character's life. The history should explain the entire character's life up until now; you need to edit it. And Laurent you and me need to talk. Edit the history then it will be reapproved.

Subject: Re: Character creation waiting for approval Thu Jul 12, 2012 2:50 pm

I hate to say it but can you add just 3 more dislikes and 1 more Like? After that, You will be approved, promise. :]

Subject: Re: Character creation waiting for approval Thu Jul 12, 2012 3:20 pm

ok, Looks good; And of course if Kouzai sees anything that I didn't catch, He'll deal with it. XD BUT I don't think I missed anything.. >w<

APPROVED BY ~River!

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