Valterra Vesta complete

Subject: Valterra Vesta complete Tue Jun 04, 2013 11:07 am

|BASICS|

Name: Valterra Vesta
Age: 17
Birthplace: Unknown
Current Residence: Earth Kingdom
Rank: Bender
Occupation: Make metals and metal inventions
Element: Earth
Pets: None
Weapons:
Vorpal Blade:

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Hobby Horse:

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Birthday: Unknown, but celebrated on New Year's Eve.
Blood type: O-
Hobbies: Tinkering and making inventions
Quirks: Borderline insane.
Family: None
Character Theme: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xn-RChtR0PQ [/url]

|APPEARANCE|

Hair: Her hair is black, with a middle part. It is always smooth and straight. It goes down below her breasts, for length.
Eyes: A bright yet faint green
Height: 5 foot 3 inches
Clothes: The girl wears a charcoal black colored dress, that ends just below the knees. An underbust that has 3 sets of buckles, made f metal, and goldish in color. Under this lays a sort of apron, rimmed with metal nails. The shoulders have the 15th century puff, and the sleeves reach all the way down to her wrists. 2 buckles are right below the puffs and 3 more are on her forearms. At the neck there are 2 layers of white lace ruffles. She wheres knee high steel toe boots. They are black in color and have buckles all the way up the leg. She sports black and white stripped stockings. Black gloves cover from her wrist to her knuckles.
Skin: She has smooth pale skin. She always has bags under her eyes.
Body Type: Thin, and fragile looking
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|CHARACTERISTICS|

Personality:
Personal Strengths:
Great metal bending
high intelligence
chi blocking abilities
strategical
lacking of fear
Personal Weaknesses:
lacking emotion
antisocial disorder
rude
Hamartia: very easy to upset, and when she is upset she ls less rational
Personal Hero: None
Dreams and Ambitions: None as of yet

Likes:
Tinkering
solitude
quiet
metals
creating

Dislikes:
Girls who try to get their way just through looks
cheeky boys
stupidity
animosity

Brief History:

Before she was old enough to hold memories, Valterra was bound to suffering. She was sold to a sweat shop at 3 and there began her life of misery. This probably is the stem of her antisocial ways. Even in the best societies, there is a sub culture of evil. As soon as she was old enough to use basic bending she was placed in a work line. Bending various rocks and being forced to practice metal bending by night. It was always dark and hot. She remembers the heat, and the sad looks on all the other childrens' faces.

Through this trialed life she was able to care for herself and became quite crafty. Bending her way in and out of where she was told to be, and spending her time crafting other things she had thought of with the metal scraps. She became very proficient in the skills of bending. However, this life was still hard. If she or any of the others were caught doing anything deemed wrong, chi blockers would come and beat them.

Valterra was smart. She watched and studied the chi blockers carefully during her own and the beatings of her peers. She taught herself from watching how to chi block. One evening, at the age of 15, she had enough of this life. She waited till dawn, when the others slept and only a few chi blockers roamed the corridors. She was going to escape this hell. She laid still in her bed, waiting for a patrolmen to wonder past. As his foot was passing by her head, she decided to strike. She chi blocked him all the way up his leg, and trapped him below in the metal before anyone could hear his screams.

She rose from her bed and traveled the air vents and trapped all the captures she could on her way out. It was not as difficult as she assumed it would be. It would seem what trapped the kids now was really just learned helplessness. It was pounded in all of their heads from a young age, and they had given up.

She made it to the surface, and felt the first blow of cool air she had experienced since she was but 3 years old. Terra climbed up, and ran for help in the city. After contacting officers, the crime syndicate location was discovered and torn apart. All the kids cheered and were taken to the homes they were stolen in. It seems the only one sold was her. So what should they do with her? This girl's parents chose to give her up.

In the end they gave the land and the remains of the sweat shop to Terra. She rebuilt it on her own over time as a melting plant to create metal. She bends to her hearts content and creates her own little creations that she sells to to ever wants the stuff all across the Earth Kingdom. At 17 this is where she is in life. Now free, and quite wealthy.

Subject: Re: Valterra Vesta complete Tue Jun 04, 2013 4:02 pm

Hey, Valterra! Your application looks pretty good, with the exception of a few quick thinks I'm sure you'll be able to handle with ease:

chi blockers

Please fix what I've listed, and for the latter, wait on my approval. Thank you!

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