Jaiku's Application

Advanced Novice Posts : 11 Age : 32 Join date : 2012-07-19

|BASICS|

Name: Jaiku Reddiken
Age: 23 Years
Birthplace Vermilion Dragon Empire
Current Residence: Vermilion Dragon Empire
Rank: Bender
Element: Fire
Pets:
Pet Name: Kien
Pet Race: A large size wolf
Gender: Male
Description: Jaiku found Kien when he was only a little wolf. Kien had been abandoned by his pack. Jaiku took care of him in his house when Jaiku was about 16.

|APPEARANCE|

Hair: Jaiku has short straight black hair that goes down to the end of his neck. It has a bit of brown in it also.
Eyes: Jaiku has a medium size eyes, they are a brown color.
Height: 6'4"
Clothes: Jaiku wears a black jacket that has two Wolf's on each side. Then it has a large Fire Symbol on the back of it. He also wears a dark blue colored t-shirt. He wears all black from the waist to his feet. He wears furry black boots on his feet.
Skin: Jaiku''s skin is rather smooth
Body Type: Jaiku has a slim body, but he is nothing close to being a wimp. Jaiku is very well built and is very strong.

|CHARACTERISTICS|

Personality: Jaiku is not the kind of bender that you want to run into, he can be nice, but he has limits. He is mostly evil, but he has good still in him. Since his history was the worst most tragic for him, he gets sad whenever he or anyone else brings it up. He is a great fighter and never backs down. Even if he is close to death!
Personal Strengths: Has a pet wolf that obeys him and knows how to shoot arrows with a bow.
Personal Weaknesses: Bringing up his family and Not able to focus at moments.
Personal Hero: Jaiku always looked up to the greatest of firebenders, especially Zuko.
Dreams and Ambitions: Jaiku wishes of becoming a legend in the Fire Nation.

Likes: Training his Firebending, Quietness, Wolves, Being Greedy, and Destroying other people's souls!

Dislikes: Letting someone live, The killing of animals, being loud, hates being ignored, and Hates Water-bending!

Brief History: Born to two Firebenders, his mom was cruel and his dad was greatly evil. They were a poor family, but Jaiku's brother helped him through it. His name was Bytenth. Bytenth was Jaiku's training partner and his brother of course. They both ran away together but during their journey, they ran into countless Waterbenders. They killed Bytenth and Jaiku escaped.

Jaiku ran until he got to a large city, he heard rumors of a small fire village was ambushed by Water-benders and that there was no survivors. Jaiku found a Wolf when he was venturing out in the mountains and named the Wolf Kien. Kien and Jaiku had been friends ever since that day. They had adventured all over the Fire Nation looking for the Water benders that had destroyed Jaiku's village and family.

Edit: Personality has 1 paragraph, 5 sentences
History has 2 paragraphs, 5 sentences each.

Subject: Re: Jaiku's Application Thu Jul 19, 2012 6:38 pm

Approved.

Subject: Re: Jaiku's Application Thu Jul 19, 2012 9:53 pm

Unapproved by the me, again for the third character today, the personality is too short and so is the history. There is a 1 paragraph minimum for personality, and 2 for history.

Subject: Re: Jaiku's Application Thu Jul 19, 2012 10:16 pm

Perfect, lol thanks. Sorry if I get a little rough around the edges, I just set a minimum so that beginners get used to writing paragraphs, and then eventually work there ways to pages lol. Not that you're a beginner, just for others you know?

Advanced Novice Posts : 11 Age : 32 Join date : 2012-07-19

Yeah, actually I am a beginner, not to Role Play, just Avatar Role Play. XD

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