komona (needs approval)

name:komona

age:13

birthplace:southern watertribe

current residence:souther watertribe

element:water

rank:bender

pets:non

weapons:non (don't need any)

birthday:9/2/1997

bloodtype:normal

hobbies:she likes to go penguin sledding,helping around the village,hanging with friends

hair:wavy with a curl to it brown hair that goes down to her shoulders

eyes:big pretty brown eyes

height:4'9

clothes:a blue watertribe dress with a moon on the front.Seal skin boots.
watertribe bret (blue).Seal skin watertribe vest.

personalty:she loves to have fun and always makes her friends laugh when she crashes into things.She can get mad at times but rarely does.

personal strengths:when her friend smiles at her it makes her feel confident,her watertribe comb reminds her of her aunt,when she a in a battle and her friends are by her side she feels she can win the fight and do anything.

personal weakness:when somebody says she useless to the tribe.

personal hero:mom

dreams and ambitions:to master water bending,to travel the world with a friend.

likes:penguins,seal jerky.

dislikes:bossy boots,hot heads,know it all's.

brief history:mom gave birth to komona's little sister when komona was six.Dad almost died is war.

There are problems with this. One, it's too short. Way way too short. Two, you missed parts of the template, you can just copy and paste it from the template topic. Three, not a major problem, but the year in the birthday isn't necessary.