Adel...

Novice Posts : 6 Age : 30 Join date : 2014-02-22

|BASICS|
Name: Adelheid Phoenyx Fornicarás
Age: 28
Birthplace: Fire Nation
Current Residence: Fire Nation
Rank: Bender
Occupation: Vanguard General of the Imperial Vanguard
Element: Fire

Pets: Adrammelech, pet Dragon (to be created )

Weapons: Katana- Adel katana has two reinforced parallel blades set a small distance away from each other. The handle is black and the sheath his wide to fit the parallel blades. The guard is golden and has the image of a dragon.

|OPTIONAL|
Birthday: April 11th
Blood type: O-
Hobbies: Drinking, Traveling, Having Hedonistic Adventures
Quirks: N/A
Family: Hassan-e Sabbāh (Deceased)
Character Theme: Casual Theme

Battle

|APPEARANCE|
Hair: Her most distinctive trait is her hair. Since she was born she had always had white hair that is comparable to the color of the snow, hence why some people call her "the white queen", a name which she deeply detests. Smooth to the touch and long enough to reach all the way down to the nape of her back, Adelheid favors wearing most of her hair long. While most of her hair would fall onto her back, she always leaves two long strands of it to hang just over her shoulders, which often times enough would draw attention to her ears. This hairstyle is particularly her favorite because of what she would do with the front end of her hair which is shorter than the back. She would keep it up in a large bun that is swept to the left of her face. This in turns leaves her entire forehead exposed and covers her left eye most times as somewhat of a attraction. Apply this hairstyle is something she doesn't have to actually take time to do as her hair as somewhat adopted to staying that way.

Eyes: She has slim trim eyebrows that are white in color like her hair. Her eyes itself are deep set, her iris being a distinguishable color of light blue and her eyelids are naturally long and voluptuous
Height: 5'11
Clothes: Casual- Her typical attire is rather basic, yet, she wears it very well. It consists of her wearing a black dress made from silk. It is most short, reaching just above mid thigh like a miniskirt would It is mostly fight fitting around the upper half, hugging her waist and breasts closely so as to accentuate her delicate curves, albeit not so tight that it hinders her vastly in combat, then as it reaches her her legs it is more loose fitting to allow her much easier movement. It is short at the arms, only covering her shoulders, it is zipped up the center, but then just below her breasts the zipper stops, revealing much cleavage. Since she would wear a bra underneath it reveals the black bra on her chest. It is mostly see through. Albeit, without looking closely a person would never really see what underwear she has on underneath. Over it she wears a long trench coat which she had gotten from one of her old students after her graduated. It stops at around knee level, and while it can zip up the center, she prefers to leave it open in dislike of the heat. On her arms she would wear a pair of black arm warmers that extends

Skin: Fair smooth skin
Body Type:
Her body doesn't compromise of much fat since she doesn't have much on her, while most of whatever fat she does have is in the form of muscle. On her chest, she possesses average size breasts, able to fit into a D cup, firm and supple on her chest. She has a flat stomach, but not so flat that she looks like a walking stick, as such there is just a faint amount of fat along it to give her a move pronounce shaped. Her abs are well pronounced something she's proud of, and her belly button is inverted/innie. Downwards, her thighs are slender like the rest of her. There isn't much trace of fat in them and they are rather muscular, supporting her athletics background. Between her thighs they are slightly spread apart, which tends to draw more of a appeal towards her. Her feet fit into a size 8. In terms of hair and so forth, as prideful woman she is very keen on hygiene. She shaves regularly, in all the mandatory parts every week.
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|CHARACTERISTICS|
Personality:

Rude & Assertive
Maintaining a high ranking position within the Vermilion Dragon Imperial Army, as one of the High Generals, and giving how much of a mature woman she appears to be, Adelheid can actually be one of the most ill mannered woman within the Fire Nation. All of this stems from her own moral that she doesn't care what others think of her, save for a select few people who she'd pretty much consider "hers". Unless she has good reason to do such, she doesn't believe in holding her tongue. She is extremely blunt and believe sticking to her opinion unless proven otherwise.

Albeit, she tends to save her anger for people she doesn't like, and while easy to anger, she isn't one to get aggressive quickly. She mostly prefers to simply keep her disputes at a understandable tone, giving simple smart insults with the hope that she wouldn't have to get angry and become rowdy. Most times she'd simply walk away, albeit she still doesn't believe in ruining her morals too easily. Once she does throw her concern for her own morals out the window though, she can become one of the most obnoxious women ever. She cusses like a sailor and is quick to result in violent if a person does or if she finds that she is losing a argument.

Intelligent & Cunning
One thing about Adelheid that should never be underestimate is her intelligent. It is something that most people expect of her given how poise and levelheaded she carries herself, but most people still underestimate just how intelligent she is greatly.

Pass of all this, the woman is generally a very intelligent person in pretty much anything. She is capable of picking up a task for the first time, and as long as she actually has the drive to do it she can become high competent in it in about half the time it would take others. She is capable of deducing things greatly, and while a powerful Fire Bender, she is actually usually not fighting on the battlefield until she is truly needed since her intelligence is better applied for strategic purposes. She somewhat loathes her intelligence for this reason though since she'd much rather fight than do boring tasks such as planning.

Immodest & Improper
As mentioned, Adelheid isn't as "professional" as she sometimes lead people to believe she is. Along with her rather rude and assertive nature, she is quite immodest at times which stems from her not caring for the opinion of most people.

Her immodesty is best showcased by her obsession with drinking and hedonistic tendencies. Whenever she becomes annoyed or simply bored she'd either start drinking at home or especially go to a bar and drink until she feels better. Unfortunately, she never feels better, and as such, while she has a high tolerance for alcohol she pretty much would always drink until she's drunk. When she's drunk all of her grace and professionalism is all forgotten. She is pretty much one of the worst drunks there is as when she's drunk she becomes violent, blunt, reckless and hormonal all at once. She constantly claims that she'd stop drinking, and she has a few times, but she pretty much always goes back to it whenever something just slightly annoys her.

Personal Strengths: Intelligent, Acrobatic, Deceitful, Stealthy, Agile
Personal Weaknesses: Arrogant, Hedonistic, Judgmental,

Personal Hero: None
Dreams and Ambitions: Enjoy life one step at a time

Likes: Alcohol, Fire Bending, Dragons

Dislikes: Annoying People, Bad Alcohol, Dark Benders

Brief History:

Adel lived in one of the more unpopular cities in a remote part of the world, Sin. As the nickname might imply it is full of the corrupt and cowards. There are rarely any “heros” in her story. And if there were, well, they died trying to do what’s right. That inspired and influenced Adel to gain a sense of gray justice and the reason why she aimed to a Fire Nation general, to clean up the scum.

Her city is a city that does not enjoy or tolerate bending. It was built by a group of people not blessed with bending capabilities. Jealousy and hatred consumed them as their small town became bigger and bigger. Their city was filled to the brim with people who detested bending. No one was allowed in if they were a bender, and if they were discovered, they would be arrested and punished, though they were usually publically slaughtered.

As a little child Adel was quite the spy, getting her into all sorts of trouble. She used to play around with the Home Guard, her city’s military, and begged them to teach her so that she could be like them when she grew up. They caught thieves, murderers, and investigated crime; it was the type of life she wanted. Adel always admired them, though, that was before she discovered she had bending.

It was when she was about ten years old when it happened. Adel was getting picked on because she was weak and was easy to pick on. At first it was simple pushing, tripping, and humiliation. Fed up with the constant put downs and general horrible treatment, Adel stood up to them. It was only a couple of days later that they started using wooden sticks to poke and prod her with, annoying her further and further until she snapped and used a moved taught to her by one of the home guards. It was cruddy and messy at best, but it did surprise her bullies, leaving her attack with a split lip.

This caused her bully to erupt, however, as the wooden stick shot out to hit her. It went on and on, putting on bruise after bruise and breaking bone after bone. Adel instinctively brought her arms out to defend herself, but something was different as she took on the beating. Even though her heart was beating faster than normal and she was crying her eyes out, she felt protected and safe. When the stick made its final contact with her arm, it burst into flames instead of bruising or even breaking her bone.

Adel was just as astonished the other kids around her. She was quick to recover, however, as she picked up the broken stick and started to get rid of her bullies. Numbness was all she felt, but Adel was determined to keep her bending a secret. She knew what they did to the unfortunate souls that were discovered. Adel was going to end up dead if she was found out. But alas, she was only a little girl. Once the deed was carried out she collapsed and began to scream and cry until the Home Guard found her amidst the dead, covered in blood and weapon in hand.

The next few years, as punishment and a precaution, Adel was taken in by the Home Guard. She was trained with their primary weapons, a pair of swords, and how to be agile in the battle. It was a constant work for her, but Adel felt that it was needed to keep her “dark” side at bay. Keeping her bending a secret was a constant battle too as she had no one to guide her or to how to control it. She did discover, however, that her bending responded whenever she was feeling high levels of emotion. And ever since the “incident,” Adel slowly began to close herself off, her recent discovery only prompted her to perfect her mask of indifference.

It was until a Fire Nation General, Hassan-e Sabbāh adopted her. At first she didn’t take kindly to the old man as he kept pushing her beyond her limits with his extreme training methods and whenever she didn’t live up to his daily expectations she would be punished, either she had to do a thousand fire squats or go to bed with no supper or both. But the reason he pushed her was to help her fulfill her dream, she wanted to become a soldier and he wanted her to become a part of the fire nation army, and not just any regular old grunt but one that held a position similar to his, or higher.

Years had passed and she turned out to become exactly what the old man had envisioned for her, and even though she had sacrificed many things to gain the position she was happy she was able to repay the old man’s gratitude. Even though success had gotten to her head and she began slacking off, she wouldn’t want her lie to be any other way.

Subject: Re: Adel... Wed Feb 26, 2014 9:14 pm

The character looks good! Just one question! Are you applying for the head position of the Army, General OF the Army, or General IN the Army as a general (hehe pun XD) rank? I only ask because, though I know it says OF, I wanna clarify.

Mostly cuz we do have a General OF the Army, but I'm okay with Generals IN the Army Very Happy

Subject: Re: Adel... Wed Feb 26, 2014 9:20 pm

Also if you're interested I have a list of similar military positions:

Grand Master General of the Yu-Yan Archers
Fleet Admiral
General of the Airship Force
Vanguard General of the Imperial Vanguard
General of the Imperial Special Soldiers

Novice Posts : 6 Age : 30 Join date : 2014-02-22

Vanguard General of the Imperial Vanguard sounds interesting. I'll go with that :3

Subject: Re: Adel... Wed Feb 26, 2014 11:50 pm

Perfect

Just edit it into the profile of your character here and it's approved from me Very Happy

Novice Posts : 6 Age : 30 Join date : 2014-02-22

Edited

Subject: Re: Adel... Thu Feb 27, 2014 3:14 am

Approved

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