Joan Ookanagi

Novice Posts : 4 Age : 42 Join date : 2012-11-03

|BASICS|

Name: (Joan Ookanagi)
Age: (12)
Birthplace: (Earth Kingdom)
Current Residence: (Earth Kingdom)
Rank: (Civilian.)
Occupation: (None.)
Element: (Earth.)
Pets: (Leopard-Wolf. It wolf-like big leopard colored animal. It has sharp teeth and is able to be riden on.)
Weapons: (None.)

|OPTIONAL|

Birthday: (April 5.)
Blood type: (Positive.)
Hobbies: (Train, Play Outside, Hang out.)
Quirks: (Joan is a good luck charm.)
Family: (Raken Ookanagi (Father) Tiana Ookanagi (Mother)
Character Theme: (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Z-NbQvhzKM)

|APPEARANCE|

Hair: (Joan has black hair that reaches down to his neck. It is pure black and straight.")
Eyes: (Joan has medium sized eyes and their green.)
Height: (5,3)
Clothes: (Joan usually wears a green shirt with a zipper in the middle and black skinny pants that are tucked into his black shoes)
Skin: (Joan has milky white smooth skin and has a big scar on his stomach from being attacked by an animal when he was younger.)
Body Type: (Joan is muscular for a 12 year old but he is not too muscular.)
Image: ( Joan Ookanagi Nabari_1005

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|CHARACTERISTICS|

Personality: (Joan is a cool boy. He is the kind of boy who knows how to train hard. Joan is a feisty pre-teenager who sometimes does dumb things, just for fun when he is bored. He is tough at times. Joan can be smart at times, dumb at times, fun at times. Joan is a loyal boy, who stands by his friends no matter what happens. He never really backs down from a fight, but he might do it rarely if he knows he won't win. But if its protecting a friend and he knows he won't win, he dosen't care, he would still fight. Joan gives into pier pressure sometimes, like if they want him to do something and they keep on bugging him about it eventually he would give in to make them stop. Joan is a smart boy who knows how to get himself out of situations MOST of the time. He is cunning and can be sneaky at times.
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Personal Strengths: (Money-Joan has a lot of money.

Hand to Hand Combat-Joan knows how to fight well with his hands. Say like if he was fighting a boy his age. If the boy sent a open hand to Joan he would catch it and they would lock hands, you know like the game of Mercy? Joan would bend it back until the boy left him alone.

Loyalty-Joan is loyal to his friends and family and will do anything to protect them.

Agility-Joan can do flips and wall run and stuff like that.

Bending-Joan is skilled with his bending, due to being trained by his father.

Personal Weaknesses: (Hog-Bear's-Due to being attacked by one when he was younger he is scared of them.

Insulting his parents- If insults his parents, he will either get VERY MAD, or break down sad and discouraged. He will do this because His parents are alive but he dosen't like people insulting them.

Power- Some boys say he is weak but really he is not, but if someone calls him weak, it will take him about a minute to get himself together.)
Hamartia: (Being stupid-Doing fun but stupid things can get him killed.)
Personal Hero: (Avatar Aang.)
Dreams and Ambitions: (Joan has a dream for world peace forever and to repair the world.)

Likes: (Training, Doing fun things, Hanging out, Playing around, Free-running.)

Dislikes: (Hog-Bear's, Irritating things, Irritating People, Evil things, Disgusting food.)

Brief History: Joan was born on a full moon, during night. His parents were very happy for him, because people born on a full moon were rumored to be very lucky. During this time, his parents were struggling to get a new house since their old house was too small for the baby and the two. They sent Joan to live with his aunt until he was about 2. Then they came to get Joan back from his aunt. Surprisingly, it was easy to get a bigger house when they had Joan with them.

They believed Joan was their own good luck charm. They weren't gonna take advantage of him but they needed to protect him. One, because he was their son and they loved him very much and Two, he was a good luck charm and they thought without him, they were nothing. At about the age of 5, he began exhibiting signs of Earthbending. Also something terrible happened while he was five. His parents took him out in the woods to examine animals and by his parents I mean Father. They went toward a hog-bear's cave on accident. And when it came out, it slashed him across the stomach with its claws. That scar remained there till now.

Soon at about the age of 10, he started training with his dad with earthbending. His dad was a earthbender so it was kinda easy to train with him. While his mother on the other hand, trained him to take care of his family. Like doing chores, cooking, building, shopping. And about the age of 12 which he is now, people started to find out about him being a good luck charm. His good luck dosen't work ALL the time but he is lucky. The people had their ways to find out, and they tried to steal him for their own personal use. Soon since they couldn't get him they gave up.
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Subject: Re: Joan Ookanagi Sat Nov 03, 2012 4:32 pm

Um...is he a part of the Earth Kingdom Royal Family?

Novice Posts : 4 Age : 42 Join date : 2012-11-03

Yes sir.

Subject: Re: Joan Ookanagi Sat Nov 03, 2012 4:48 pm

Well there is a problem here. My character is the Earth King and as of now he doesn't even have a wife. So I am going to have to decline this app. He can't be the prince, sorry. Take that out and I would try to fix a few sentences in the way of structure. Also, why does he get mad/sad when people speak about his parents? Add that detail to his history.

Oh and remove the parenthesis around everything. You don't need to keep them.

Novice Posts : 4 Age : 42 Join date : 2012-11-03

Edited.

Subject: Re: Joan Ookanagi Sat Nov 03, 2012 4:58 pm

Approved.