Revontheus app

Novice Posts : 7 Age : 25 Join date : 2012-10-13

|BASICS|
Name: Revontheus Ravenwing
Age: about 14 (in human years)
Birthplace: Unknown
Current Residence: The middle of nowhere. litterally, i cant see anything.
Rank: Bender
Occupation: Destroy stuff, read books, summon other demons.
Element: Darkness, and a TINY bit of earth: crystal bending.
Pets: Lightning, my cat.
Weapons: A katana and a scythe.(i will explain more in weapon creation)

|OPTIONAL|
Birthday: UNKNOWN
Blood type: Unknown
Hobbies: cookies(yes all demons/half-demons love cookies)
Quirks: is half demon from wielding katana, is there anything unusual with that?
Family: None
Character Theme: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qH9q2bwdeto&feature=related

|APPEARANCE|
Hair: White, Spiky, Short, Has horns.
Eyes: Orange, normal size.
Height: 5,0
Clothes: Wears leggings, armwraps, a sort of short, black robe, and black shoes
Skin: Smooth, pale skin
Body Type: Kinda skinny, with wings
Image: is at the end

|CHARACTERISTICS|
Personality: Is calm, cold headed, but other times is Destroying everything.
Usually is found reading books or chilling in the underworld.
Reads books about "illusion" bending, a trick that requires a lot of training with darkness bending.

Personal Strengths: Can fly(DUH), heal self with darkness, and make illusions real.
Personal Weaknesses: Powerless without wings or weapons, and is not exactly immune to light.
Hamartia: Wings are life source.
Personal Hero: Nulgath, his master.
Dreams and Ambitions: not yet.

Likes: cats, books, Weapons, Flying, Destruction

Dislikes: Light, lava, dogs, PPL fixing stuff, his Opposite: Matt(an angel).

Brief History: Created when two demons colided with a human: a raven and a Ice spirit.(WHILE HOLDING THE KATANA OF NULGATH)
The ice spirit affected his personality while the raven gave him wings.

Nulgath took him in as his apprentice, and he found his cat, lightning.
She was shooting laserz, like any awesome cat would do.
She could talk and change into dual blades.
Ps. i SUCK at making histories.

Image below:

Revontheus app A8bi1f

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There are a few things that need to be done in order for this app to be accepted.

1. Your personal history needs to be one paragraph

2. Your personal history needs to be 2 paragraphs

3. Demon Island or Demons in general are NPC's. This means that no one really can be a Demon besides a curse or a weapon from Demon Island gives them Half demon blood.

4. The residence being the Void, that does not exist here on this site.

Please redo these few things I have listed and I will gladly regrade this application. If you have any other questions regarding this application before you change things around. You may private message Kouzai and Earth King Lu, as they are the CO head admins. Smile

Novice Posts : 7 Age : 25 Join date : 2012-10-13

IDK how long a paragraph is XD

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A paragraph is three sentences at most.

Novice Posts : 7 Age : 25 Join date : 2012-10-13

k after that, i'm done typing this and i can rp YAY!

Subject: Re: Revontheus app Sun Oct 14, 2012 1:57 pm

A paragraph Is a minimum of 4 sentences. Smile

It could be 3 sentences only if all three are well put together and discriptive. Here is an example of a Proper history:

Quote :: Brief History For the whole Light kingdom family: The king before, Daisuke's Cousin, and his family was assinated by an unknown party. After running out of heir, Daisuke and his family was called to the thrones to serve their kingdom. He has two childern so far: His eldest son, Keiichi; and His daughter Lona. Lona and keiichi are only half siblings but still siblings. Keiichi was the son of Daisuke's first wife and Lona from Naomi, His current Wife. He also has another child on the way; Wonder if it'll be a boy or a girl.

The king and his family rule the kingdom with a open and large heart. The king it mighty and will protect his people; The Queen is kind and will heal her people; the Prince is still young and will one day take the place as protector; And hopefully The Princess lona will do the same as her mother.

And these are examples of Great Historys/Back Grounds:

Quote :: Brief History: Elarang's family of Gilrin, use to be a great family. They use to powerful, kind, and rich until the head of the family was kill and replaced by His delluted brother. He seemed very harsh and forced taxed on the side, branch families. It was rather quick process for the money and riches to decrease. The head took it all in his greed, ravishing in it glory. And also it wasn't long before Assassians came to claim his greed for their own.

The Family was roobed and the Head was killed. Taking the good with the bad, The nephew took over as head and began to rebuild the Family to it's former glory. Elarang was born to the Grandson of that man. She had 3 older Sisters and one younger brother. Her brother would be the one to take over the family while the daughters, including Elarang, Would be married off to help the family's wealth increase once again.

All of Elarang's life she was tought to be pleasent and how to use manners. On the Out side she was the perfect noble that her partent molded her to be; Or should I say Parent And .. Step mother. Elarang's Father had remarried 3 times. Her sister's mother was a grant women but after being caught with another man, The head banish the women. And Elarang's Father married again, this time with her mother. Elarang heard she was beautiful and strong, even though she wasn't very like among the the other members of the family (Yet, they dare not mutter a word). Unfornately though, Elarang was forced out through a C-Section as her mother died durning labor. Finally When Elarang was 5, Her father remarried again to A porsalin doll crafter. This lady was Fierce with the childern as she seemed to whip them into shape, litterally. She was the mother of Elarang's Youngest brother and undoubtablly love him more than any of the others.

Even though she was surrounded by family, Elarang grow up alone. When she was 15, She started sneaking out of the mansion to learn martial art from a boy she met in the market. Besides her "Lesson" That her family provided for Elarang in Dark bended, She knew nothing. This boy helped her with that and with the development of her TRUE Dark Bending. This went on for about a 4 years. The boy and Herself had fallen in love and was planning on running away with each other. Elarang had it all planned until her step mother caught sneaking out that night.

Elarang pleaded as she was punished and Forbidden to ever see the boy again. Elarang was devastated and went into depression when she heard The boy had left with out her. Little did she know her father sent a guard out to threaten the boy and force him to leave the state. Elarang Was silent in haterd for a long time until she though she'd never feel anything again after reciving a message from a patrol report saying, 'A boy was found dead, murdered to a 1st degree'.

It's been 3 years not and Elarang had started to thaw out with the help of her companion, Pephannas. Pephannas, or Phe, was a large Panther-cat. Elarang recieved her from her father as he has recieved it from a member of the side family. She gracefull accepted it but it was all an act at first. That was all she began to base her life off of, at first. Maybe something could change or maybe her father will keep setting up suiters that she not even interested in... Who knows, only Time will tell.

Quote :: Born into a family that had nothing but a unique Ability, Mehn grow up training her self in Fire bending and working as hard as possible. Her family never had the coin to get their daughter fire bending lessons or martial Art lessons. Since the time she could understand the concept, Mehn trained under her father's watch to learn the family ability passed on from parent to child. Unfortunately for when Mehn had just started her training Her father was taken from her by a man who came to rob her home and of what money they had.

In atempt to pervent the man from taking the rest of their belongings, Mehn's father fought against the man. The rodder was a waterbender and a murdering Blood bender at that. Mehn was on her way home, just ahead of her mother and brothers, from the market with a little bit of food for when she walked in, watching as her father mudered himself. At first she was shooked and was cunfused at the site as she watched her father take his last breath. His eyes stared at her until looking at something in the corner of the room that could not be seen by Mehn at the time. Tears flooded to her eyes as she screamed her father's name and ran to his side.

She didn't even see the man with his evil grin as he grabbed her from behind. Mehn Shocked, turned spattering fire across the room. The water bender growled in pain as the fire rubbed against his body. Mehn was scared and barely able fight against such a foe. The thug was strong and even though the Mehn kept up her bending at him, He swung his hand. The girl prepared to scream just before a roll of water in cased her mouth. He ticked his figure at her as she cried, only adding to the water around her mouth. Soon the liquid filled up to her nose,leaving her with out oxgyen. She struggled until she freed a hand and pressed it against his eye, releasing as much fire she she could conjure. He tossed on pain as he head his eye socket. The water fell from her face and Mehn in haled sharply, coughing.

she manage to scramble towards the door in a desprite attempt to get again before she couldn't move. No matter how hard she tried to even twitch, she could not. Suddenly she felt herself throw her own body backwards, only to face the man. It was blood bending, a horrid art that allows a water bender to control it pocessor. The man looked at her through a half burned face in rage.

There was silence before laughter and the door opened at the front of the house. And just like that the man's rage turned from anger intoa sick smirk. He only raised his figer to his lips and walked into a near shadow of a closet, moving Mehn to her father;'s body, Silent amd kneeling befor the dead.

She was forced to trick her family, and she couldn't warn her family at all, just before the man forced her to Kill them. Tear of the greatest sorrow and depression. As she stred into her little brother eyes she wished she could kill herself as she took his life, burning him alive, The screams of her family as they died tore her apart. Just as is was over, the man now finished his revenge.

He was beating her to a brick of her life, Which included doing on to her that she did onto her. Her eye-ball rolled across the floor, froozen. She would have been killed if it wasn't for a "Hero". A Man who was just passing by and heard the screamming and smell of blood entered the House. It turned out that he was Fire Nation Military.and a guard off duty for the day. He was just in time as he was forced to eliminate the waterbender. It was then he sent help for the family. Of course Mehn was the only one left alive. From then on she was taken into the care of the state. For years she was depressed, until the man that saved her came back to the orphanage and took her on as his apprentice.

When he took her with her, it was the happiest she had been in years. It had been the 2 years since her family was killed at the age of 8. Then she trained under the man who saved her for over 6 years. Then following in his foot steps and to take revange of her family, she Joined the Miilitary for the Fire Nation. She has served over 4 years now and had worked so hard to get through the ranks.

She speaks little of her past and gets angry if insulted about anything doing with ehr past or family. It is very rare to get her to re-open old wounds.

* Please Keep in Mind All Of these Examples Are Actual Back Grounds To My Characters; No Plagerism, please. *
Thank you!

Novice Posts : 7 Age : 25 Join date : 2012-10-13

crap.

Subject: Re: Revontheus app Sun Oct 14, 2012 2:13 pm

Yes and remember You may not be a demon on this site, only a human with half demon blood from a weapon or a curse.

Novice Posts : 7 Age : 25 Join date : 2012-10-13

I already wrote it in my weapon info

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