Jo Hung

Subject: Jo Hung Thu Jul 19, 2012 5:09 pm

Name: Jo fu Hung
Age: 36
Birthplace: Omashu
Current Residence: Omashu
Rank:N/A
Occupation: Store Owner, Former Thief
Element: Earth Bender
Pets:N/A
Weapons: None

|APPEARANCE|
Hair: Has has black hair with receding grey forming around the sides that hangs down his back in a pony tail.
Eyes: He has small pointed round eyes the glisten in the sunlight
Height:6'2
Clothes: He wears a brown cloth tunic and brown rough pants with green patches on them on his work days, He normally wears a fine green silk top.
Skin: He has rough tan skin
Body Type: He is medium size built, a little pudgy In the belly,

|CHARACTERISTICS|
Personality: He is a wise calm man who does not like fighting, he sometimes gets grumpy when he has alot of things to do like running his swords. He loves talking to people and is mostly happy.
Personal Strengths: Fighting, peacemaking, wisdom, blacksmith
Personal Weaknesses: Fire, age,
Hamartia: Losing a loved one.
Personal Hero: N/A
Dreams and Ambitions:He dreams to one day work for the loyal earth king by his side and raise a family,

Likes: Earth, Women, swords, hung gar kung fu, praying mantis,

Dislikes: Crane style, snake style, fire, hot air, monkey's.

Brief History: He was born In the city of Omashu under the watchful care of his mother, His father disappeared when he was young . As he grew older he discovered he had earth bending skills. In his teens he practiced his bending alone since he had no one to help him, he practiced mainly by the cliffs in omashu, on one after noon he was practicing beside his house and his mom came out to call him in for dinner he lifted a huge boulder in the air and when she startled him he dropped it onto her crushing her. He swore to never use it again always crying to himself.As he grew older he became a thief having to steal to survive sometimes even injure people. He got out the life remembering his mother's words '' When you steal you are stealing the right for someone to have something'' he now owns his own store in Omashu selling and making weapons, even goods. He dreams to one day work for the earth king and to raise a nice family .

Guest

Approved, you need to make a weapons app, just posting a photo doesn't count

Subject: Re: Jo Hung Thu Jul 19, 2012 9:52 pm

Unapproved by me, the personality it WAY to short, and so is the history. 1 Paragraph minimum for personality, and 2 paragraph minimum for history.

Subject: Re: Jo Hung Sun Jul 22, 2012 2:10 pm

Look it over again.

Guest

The personality is still way too short, its just two sentences. A paragraph minimun is 4 sentences.