Brian

|BASICS|
Name: Brian young)
Age: (19)
Birthplace: Sonora, dark state of fire nation)
Current Residence: dark state of fire nation )
Rank: (Master Bender)
Element: Dark
Pets:
Weapons: a large scythe in each hand that helps Brian bend without getting tired.

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Birthday: (688)
Blood type: (o+)
Hobbies: (fighting and learning)
Quirks: (unusually strong in Dark bending)
Character Theme: (Head strong)

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Hair: (he has dark blue, short hair that is kinda curly but keeps it under a black hood.)
Eyes: Dark blue and/or red eyes that change with his mood)
Height: (5"7)
Clothes: he wears a dark black sleeveless vest with the spirit angel of death seered into the back, and a studded hood. his black pants are tattered from constant battle.
Skin: (he has smooth pale skin that never tans.
Body Type: (he is very well built and has rippling muscles.
Image:

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[size=11]Personality: (he has a give them hell attitude and he also has a thirst for vengeance but can be very kind when appropriate.
Personal Strengths: (learning, leading, and problem solving)
Personal Weaknesses: not knowing when to stop or how, and a strong sense of evil within himself.
Personal Hero: My hero is my mother who was killed by fire benders)
Dreams and Ambitions: (Be the best dark bender and help people as he avenges his parents death.

Likes: (he enjoys the thrill of battle and thrives off domination over the wicked.He loves an adventure with a challenge.

Dislikes: (Brian dislikes arrogant people and thieves.also he isnt very fond of light benders.)

Brief History:

.His name is Brian Young, He was born in the dark town of Sonora in the shadow lands but as a child he witnessed his parents both being murdered as he was kidnapped by the fire bending crime lord Hades.Soon after the tragic crime Brian, was taken to a dark state of the fire nation. later Brian, began to master the dark arts of shadow bending and assassination techniques in order to please his criminal captors. Eventually at age 18 he found a opportunity to escape the compound that had held him most of his life.As he left he herd the ear splitting roar of a brilliant white tiger cub that a few kids were tormenting.Even tho Brian was in a hurry he felt obligated to save the beautiful and ferocious feline,who soon became Brian's best and only true friend.
Now as a 19 year old Dark bender Brian, continues to perfect his skill. As he attempts to outrun Hades and his crew of miscreants Brian is finding pieces of his past as well as creating a future.For now he ventures anywhere that benders use their gift for crimes against the innocent.

Umm Brian, not approved.

You need to add waaay more detail.

Things you need to work on:

1. Name, First and Last

2. Where is Sonora (In dark nation?)

3. No one can bend dark and light the opposing forces would contradict each other and kill you, so no bending both, chose one or the other

4. Birth Date is used in the current year 707 and before it is 707 years after Ozai's death so you character was born in 688

5. Add more detail in the cloth section (Ex. He usually wears a sleek black shirt, that looks more like a vest embedded with the angel of death on the back. He also wears (put in other things here) )

6. The title Characteristics is heading the section, you don't put anything beside it

7. Personality 1+ sentences and please don't use explicit language

8. No superman in Avatar world

9. Add more likes and dislikes

10. Make a history you can't say 'IDK' it doesn't cut it, 1 paragraph minimum

Here is an example character (using my own character) don't worry that your history has to be this long:
https://avatar-rpg-revised.forumotion.com/t1362-psykeh-charna

You don't have any dislikes.


Also, you must get your pet approved in the pet creation section

Okay like what Laurent was saying you need to fix a few more things:

1. Need to get weapon approved in weapon approval area

2. Need to get pet approved in pet approval area

3. Eyes do not change with mood so choose the color red or blue

4. No avatar Korra on this site so she can't be his hero

5. THere is no republic city, and no non-bender revolution, (in your dislikes section)

Just edit this and I will take another look at it, thanks!

Approved.


Finally

wait wait wait master bender at the age of 19

It's possible.

Laurent Kouzai said I was only one to work on this character app last night...thanks for taking my job........

Your welcome!

And sine when are you in chat? I never see you! ;(