Hivan

Advanced Novice Posts : 16 Age : 27 Join date : 2012-04-23

|BASICS|

Name:Hivan Toshima
Age:15
Birthplace:Island off the coast of Ba Sing Se
Current Residence:Ba Sing Se
Rank:bender
Element:earth

|APPEARANCE|

Hair:Black hair that stands up all over, and has 'specks' of silver in it
Eyes:greyish eyes with specks of green
Height:5' 7"
Clothes:Green shirt with black dragons all over it, and black pants with green dragons on them
Skin:normal
Body Type:moderate

|CHARACTERISTICS|

Personality:after witnessing his father killed, he closed up, instead, focussing on his bending and his other offensive arts, and he is a hard worker and determined to help teh needy, when he can.
Personal Strengths:he thinks his bending cant be beat, and he beleives that he will be the best earthbender, minus the royal family of course
Personal Weaknesses:he doesnt excel in knoledge, and can barely remember facts about anything
Personal Hero:the Earth king
Dreams and Ambitions:to become the greatest non-royal earthbender

Likes:food, bending, freinds, family

Dislikes:working, water, and criminals

Brief History:after seeing his dad killed for crimes he didnt commit, he moved to ba sing se with his mom, and quickly fit in, although he doesnt like working the long hours he has too in his mom's soup shop.he wanted to restart his life in ba sing se, but it seems that he will keep criminals on his tail, no matter where he goes, so his new goal is too excel in his bending and end up stopping them. he also wants to meet the earth king, and show him some earth bending moves that he's created.he is also hoping to some day protect his mom from the crime on the streets. and to one day maybe become the one known for wiping out robbery and burglary from the city.

Subject: Re: Hivan Fri Apr 27, 2012 7:43 pm

This is app is really short. Make the personality longer, and the history needs to be another paragraph longer. It's a rule.